illegal immigration on our school systems and how it affects our country (see right). With California being a border state and one of the most diversified states in the U.S., I have decided to focus primarily on this area. With California hosting America’s largest population of illegal immigrants it is one of the largest states bearing the costs of illegal immigration in the form of education, healthcare and incarceration. A new study from the Federation for American Immigration Reform (FAIR) examines that Californians are spending approximately $7.7 billion dollars annually on education for illegal immigrant children and for their U.S. natural born siblings. Steven A. Camarota, the author of the report “says that households headed by illegal aliens imposed more than $26.3 billion in costs on the federal government in 2002 and paid only $16 billion in taxes, creating a net fiscal deficit of $10.4 billion, or $2,700 per illegal household.” The Center for Immigration Studies in Washington DC, also estimates that a minimum of 1.1 illegal alien children attend school in other states of America. With an estimate of over 15 % of students enrolled in the California public school system being children of undocumented immigrants, who for the most part are members of society who do not contribute to public school funding through tax payments like other Americans, faces a difficult task of educating these kids. This is an especially arduous test, considering the average estimate of a yearly Kindergarten through 12th grade education is $7,200. Currently only a fraction of tax-paying inhabitants are paying enough into the system to support the constant and valuable education of our students. “Illegal Immigration: Are Opponents Being FAIR”
Thank you for a concisely constructed post on the effects of illegal immigration. You clearly have conducted extensive research and gathered relevant quotes to support your argument against the some of the statements reported by FAIR. I believe the unique structure of your entry, which incorporates passages from various secondary sources, is an effective method to engage your readers. By providing extracts from these external websites, which you justify and support with your own opinion, the readers are presented with a multitude of viewpoints on which they can accept or reject on their own discretion. For example, you take excellent oddments of information from the Los Angeles Times which validate the credibility in your underlying argument. Having read other articles regarding this topic, I was pleasantly surprised to witness a fellow blogger defending some of the issues of illegal immigration and how some of the opponents use illegal immigration as a way to disseminate hate. I agree with your remarks that some opponents are simply pointing the finger at illegal immigrants and are saying “They are the one who are responsible for all our problems.” I also agree with you when you state that providing hate speech and misinformation about a group of people is not a way to solve a problem. Overall, you have a strong post that addresses some of the critical issues that the United States faces in regards to illegal immigration, but could benefit from the following suggestion. Although your first link to the Los Angeles Times does offer great information and statistics, you did not personally elaborate on these alternative results nor did you consider any additional reasons for relaying you feelings about how some people use illegal immigration issues as a way to disseminate hate. I feel your post could have been even stronger if you identified these factors, instead of solely focusing on some of the misinformation reported by FAIR. Lastly, I admire your initiative in providing valid information from reputable sources like the Los Angeles Times in your blog.
“California’s Illegal Aliens Cost Taxpayers Nearly $9 Billion A Year”
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I would first like start off by taking this opportunity to thank you not only for this informative post but also for your overall blog. I found it fascinating to get your opinions on some of the issues California and America in general is facing with illegal immigration today. I am glad that you chose to include the report conducted by FAIR recently on your blog. As evidence from the article's persuasive tone, I firmly believe your ability to exude magnetism through your writing style, which is a quality trait that clearly distinguishes you as a successful writer from others. I find it very interesting how you capture the opinions of two different people who have very different views on illegal immigration. Including quotes from the man who actually administered the FAIR report and Gerardo Gonzalez, director of Cal State San Marcos’ National Latino Research Center provides your reader with key information that leads them to pursue their own opinion on what the issues at hand really are and come to a decision on who is right and who is wrong. On the other hand, while I believe the facts and statistics that you incorporated in your entry are necessary elements, some of them are not well supported and seem a bit deceiving. For example, you use Jack Martins information that the report estimates the total cost at $10.5 billion each year, but that is offset by about $1.7 billion in taxes that illegal immigrants pay. I would have liked to have seen where some of this information was obtained from. Although I find your blog very informative, I would have liked to read your opinion on the research mentioned. It would have been beneficial for me to read the thoughts and ideas of someone who has dedicated her time to researching some of the effects of illegal immigration on the American economy. With great information provided in your blog, do you feel that the information provided in the FAIR report is really accurate since they are only actually using estimations in the data and not hard core evidence to support their statistics? Lastly, I admire your initiative in providing valid information in your blog. I really enjoyed the information you provided and I wish to read more blogs pertaining to immigration in the future.

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Miguel I found your blog and its comments on the other blogs very entertaining to read and thought provoking. However I feel that you don’t take a very moderate or fair position when it comes to illegal immigration. “While it seems California is being hurt by educating many of the children of illegal immigrants, it is easy to forget that the real people that are being affected by this quandary are the children. Yes, it is true that we as Americans suffer as well because we all pay the price for educating illegal immigrants with our taxes, but without the adequate education a child deserves we all end up losing in the end when it comes to the future of our nation.” The above quote was like a half admittance of the problem that illegal immigration represents for America and California in particular. I felt like you missed the fact that maybe why education for children was so inaccurate in places was because of illegal immigrants. With fewer students in a classroom teachers could give more attention, the schools would have less of a budget strain, and would in theory turn out better and brighter students if they were not forced with the prospect of educating Mexico’s young people as well as America’s.
I really find your blog to be very informative and resourseful, as I am a parent of three children myself. I was raised by immigrant parents and I had the luxury of being born in the United States. My parents came from Vietnam to the United States at an early age and I remember seeing them struggle through the hardships of life that an immigrant family goes through in the United States. With the economic turmoil that the US is facing right now what do you think of costs that that illegal immigrant students are facing right now for a college education? I ask this only because it is a hot topic in the media right now and much of my family is affected with the tuition laws for California's illegal residents that have been in the state for years.
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